So, my beta comments are back. She liked the story and gave me really excellent comments, and a few questions which I have now altered. Just a sentence or so, no big chances.
However, she did mention giving Bella more happy memories, so I have. One so delightful, I’m dead jealous.
I’m not spoiling it, you’ll have to read the book, but even I think I have outdone myself with this one. In fact, I’m adding something along the same lines to the second Romancing in Scotland book. No spoilers on that one either, but I will say it’s on the second draft/first edit and going well. Look out for that release in 2019.