So, my beta comments are back. She liked the story and gave me really excellent comments, and a few questions which I have now altered. Just a sentence or so, no big chances.
However, she did mention giving Bella more happy memories, so I have. One so delightful, I’m dead jealous.
I’m not spoiling it, you’ll have to read the book, but even I think I have outdone myself with this one. In fact, I’m adding something along the same lines to the second Romancing in Scotland book. No spoilers on that one either, but I will say it’s on the second draft/first edit and going well. Look out for that release in 2019.
When I wrote Persecuting Abi, I placed a disclaimer in the front stating it was in British English. No one took any notice and the spellings got brought up in my review. Since then it’s been changed to American English.
However, one of my beta’s has picked up on the ‘wrong spelling’ of realised. So I need to make one thing very clear to all my readers.
‘Falling for a Duke’ is Scottish, I am English. Therefore, my Scottish novels will be wrote in British English.